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Jan. 12th, 2009 | 09:54 pm
mood: awake awake
music: Smile Maker- NEWS

Title: Stare
Group/pairing: hinted KoyaPi and one-sided Shige/Koyama
Prompt: #49 – Stare
Word Count: 237
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything ;p
Author's Note: It's something that came to me after staring (pun intended) at the prompt:P Just some angst. Yea.

It's never been odd for Yamashita-kun to stare off into space. But it's something else entirely when he's staring at you. He'll pretend like he's not, glancing in other directions every few minutes, but he'll always look back to where you are.
During dance rehearsals, if your position happened to be next to him in that song, he'll accidentally bump into you, or send you the dazzling smile, the smile that he doesn't show to the rest of the world. That's the only thing that doesn't belong to anyone but himself. And you.
You merely brush it off as Member Ai, like any other commonplace friendship bond, but it's more than that, and I know. I know because I used to do the same thing with you. Except you never noticed, and now, watching the two of you, something in me aches.

I messed up my knee pretty bad when I was five. I was trying to rescue a cat from my neighbour's tree; that was before I knew I was allergic. But I remembered the doctors telling me that it would have been better if I had broken something, rather than straining it. It took me three times as long to heal that injury. Now, I'm starting to wonder if I would go through the same thing with you.

I don't hide that I'm staring at you, but he's staring too. And that's all you see.
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A/N: Well, I feel pretty lame for writing so little for this prompt. But that's all I got:/ At least it's more than 100 words:) *gets bricked*
<3

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Comments {26}

unfenced_fire

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from: [info]unfenced_fire
date: Jan. 13th, 2009 08:23 am (UTC)
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Ah somehow I feel jealous as soon as I read a different Koyama or Shige pairing... (note to self: that's when you know that you're writing to much)~
This was short and so.. eh.. I'm lacking words~ eh so melancholic? Yeah somehow.
Poor Shige :(

Well done <3

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Anna

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from: [info]dark3princess
date: Jan. 13th, 2009 09:02 pm (UTC)
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lol, aw, I ship whatever feels right, so I don't get jealous of other pairings, tehhe. But that's cute:P
*here's my default/OTP KoyaShige icon to make up for it*<3

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addict for dramatics

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from: [info]ununoriginal
date: Jan. 13th, 2009 12:23 pm (UTC)
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oh, please dun feel lame, i liked it a lot! &hearts

But I remembered the doctors telling me that it would have been better if I had broken something, rather than straining it. It took me three times as long to heal that injury.

this line left the strongest impression on me - i dun noe if it's cuz u've went thru tat urself, but it's actually kinda true, and makes the whole drabble more realistic for me :)

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Anna

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from: [info]dark3princess
date: Jan. 13th, 2009 09:01 pm (UTC)
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Yay<3
It didn't happen to me, but my friend did something to her leg, and she told me that her doctors said that it would've been easier if she had actually broken it. Yea. I hope I got the point across that Shige would rather have a broken heart, than an aching 'strained' heart:)
But, I'm glad you liked it ^_^

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Begonia

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from: [info]snowflakezz
date: Jan. 13th, 2009 01:29 pm (UTC)
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Please don't feel lame!! I enjoyed this one a lot!!
Short, but angsty T__T *pats shige* KoyamaPi is secretly one of my favourite pairings too though *gets bricked

Definitely a good read after a long day in uni XDD~

P.S: Thanks for the comment on my blogspot =) I replied you over there XD

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Anna

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from: [info]dark3princess
date: Jan. 13th, 2009 08:49 pm (UTC)
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Yea, I suddenly got into it after reading Triv's stuff:P
I shall reply :D
<3

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Anna

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from: [info]dark3princess
date: Jan. 13th, 2009 08:50 pm (UTC)
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And thanks for reading ^^

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trivialaffair

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from: [info]trivialaffair
date: Jan. 14th, 2009 04:13 am (UTC)
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Oooh nice :D

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Anna

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from: [info]dark3princess
date: Jan. 14th, 2009 05:11 am (UTC)
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Thanks for reading ^^

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Ivonne

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from: [info]ivonnemcgruder
date: Jan. 14th, 2009 09:37 am (UTC)
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moooooouuuu....stupid anawere Kei-chan :(

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Anna

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from: [info]dark3princess
date: Jan. 14th, 2009 06:16 pm (UTC)
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lol:)
I'm sorry, what does anawere mean?
Thanks for reading!

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Ivonne

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from: [info]ivonnemcgruder
date: Jan. 14th, 2009 08:48 pm (UTC)
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sorry UNaware :)

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fr_gal

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from: [info]fr_gal
date: Jan. 14th, 2009 01:34 pm (UTC)
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Uwa, so few words and you've shattered my little heart into a million pieces.

*runs off to cry a river now*

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Anna

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from: [info]dark3princess
date: Jan. 14th, 2009 06:10 pm (UTC)
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Aw..I'm sorry, don't cry~ :)

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I miss your battle cry...

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from: [info]silentchord
date: Jan. 24th, 2009 03:29 pm (UTC)
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Awww~ So bittersweet. Oh Shige :(

And don't feel lame, it's not about how much you write, it's what you write and this was lovely. Quality over quantity and all that jazz <3

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Anna

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from: [info]dark3princess
date: Jan. 25th, 2009 04:59 am (UTC)
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Ahyes:)
Thank you-I'm so happy you read my fic!!
<3

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biancaeris

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from: [info]biancaeris
date: Jan. 25th, 2009 06:17 am (UTC)
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I really like this! Tt breaks my heart to see Shige like that. ;-; </3 But great writing! :)

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Anna

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from: [info]dark3princess
date: Jan. 25th, 2009 06:46 am (UTC)
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
:) <3

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nia

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from: [info]uchikins
date: Feb. 10th, 2009 09:34 pm (UTC)
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ♥

Rooting for KoyaPi dammit. XD;

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Anna

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from: [info]dark3princess
date: Feb. 11th, 2009 04:09 am (UTC)
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tehhe-they've become somewhat of a public pair these days, ne~
Thanks for reading! ^^

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tachikawa1119

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from: [info]tachikawa1119
date: Feb. 10th, 2009 09:41 pm (UTC)
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awww XP
it's kind of cute with a little bittersweet-ness in it X]]
nice~

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Anna

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from: [info]dark3princess
date: Feb. 11th, 2009 04:08 am (UTC)
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Yes:)
Thanks for reading both fics ^^

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indian_monsoon

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from: [info]indian_monsoon
date: Apr. 19th, 2009 03:36 pm (UTC)
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Hi! I actually stumbled upon this fic in Jent remix(because lightstylings posted the remix), and i just wanted to say that i LOVE this verse/story. My heart aches for Shige, because he has been in love with Koyama for so long and yet Yamapi comes and 'takes' Koyama away out of nowhere. Poor Shige :(

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Anna

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from: [info]dark3princess
date: Apr. 19th, 2009 09:28 pm (UTC)
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Aw, thank you! I'm glad you liked it:D
And thank you for letting me know the remix is up ^^

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BananyPhophany

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from: [info]bananyphophany
date: Aug. 24th, 2009 06:29 am (UTC)
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I hope you don't mind lots of comments in one go, because you're about to get them. XD

It's never been odd for Yamashita-kun to stare off into space. But it's something else entirely when he's staring at you.
I AGREE. Oh my gosh, that would be quite scary. Yamapi has this kind of intense stare and having it directed at you would be, uh... o___o is the best way I can think to describe it.

I know because I used to do the same thing with you. Except you never noticed, and now, watching the two of you, something in me aches.
That's really sad. Ah, oblivious Koyama. He is one of my favourites when it comes to sad-fic. :( But it's still so hurty.

I don't hide that I'm staring at you, but he's staring too. And that's all you see.
OMT (it's really inconvenient that the T is right above the G. Most people would pick OMT as a typo...) MY ACHING HEART. D:
Even though this prompt was tiny, it's pretty packed full of emotion. Sad sad sad... T__T But good work..

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Anna

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from: [info]dark3princess
date: Aug. 25th, 2009 12:10 am (UTC)
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I just got a whole bunch of comments from you and I'm so happy!!!!!!!! :DDDDDDDDDDd ♥
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my stuffz:)
You didn't have to, but you did :DDDDDDD

And all your comments are so detailed and just AMAZING A;LDKFJADJF *SQUISHES*

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